No more will you feel my breath on your thigh
nor the warmth of my lips as we kiss.
A teasing of tongues…
while hair falling softly
caressing my breasts, you’ll too miss.
nor the warmth of my lips as we kiss.
A teasing of tongues…
while hair falling softly
caressing my breasts, you’ll too miss.
You have shredded my heart and crushed all my dreams
I am hollow and void of emotion.
The day will soon come
when you search for my love.
What you’ll find is old porn and some lotion.
I am hollow and void of emotion.
The day will soon come
when you search for my love.
What you’ll find is old porn and some lotion.
(Kiss this)
DisIsMyPlace 
May 8, 2008 at 4:26 pm |
Ok, that is awesome! Huzzah!! 😀
May 8, 2008 at 6:38 pm |
beautiful….
🙂
on a side note, I collect gargoyles….where can I get that one???
May 8, 2008 at 6:48 pm |
Awesome 🙂 but that is not how you feel is it? I am still sore 😦
May 9, 2008 at 2:19 am |
Brutal. 😛 Dare I ask what your inspiration was? 😉
May 9, 2008 at 8:55 am |
Taoist ~ Thank you much. Hell hath no fury… 😉
Glassowater ~ gargoyles are so cool. I wish I owned that one. I found the pic when I was googling “Mooning”
Kaylee ~ I have felt that way in the past, but all is good in my hood right now. It will take some time for your body to heal… I wish I could speed up the process. Sending you hugs.
Spidey ~ You can ask, but… 😀 I started putting that one together in my head a few years back when Mr. J and I hit a bumpy patch. yesterday, I was a tad bit miffed with him and knocked out the complete poem.
We are crazy like that… The good part is we both know that the crazies pass and we love each other enough to work thru ANYTHING. This writing helps me get it out of my head so that I can focus on revenge… hahaha… just kidding. We are good.
“I love me some him”
May 9, 2008 at 9:08 am |
Wow! Great poem!! LOVED the ending!
Glad it doesn’t reflect your current feelings towards your man! 🙂
May 9, 2008 at 2:40 pm |
Awesome. This should be in a Valentine’s Day card.
May 9, 2008 at 3:56 pm |
Trisha ~ I have been reading a lot of Dorothy Parker lately and her twisted humor is rubbing off on me. (not that I need any encouragement)
Thanks Wendy, but for some strange reason Hallmark locks their doors when I knock. 😀
May 13, 2008 at 10:51 pm |
Loved it, such a great picture, too….