No more will you feel my breath on your thigh
nor the warmth of my lips as we kiss.
A teasing of tongues…
while hair falling softly
caressing my breasts, you’ll too miss.

You have shredded my heart and crushed all my dreams
I am hollow and void of emotion.
The day will soon come
when you search for my love.
What you’ll find is old porn and some lotion.





 (Kiss this)


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9 Responses to “Scorned”

  1. Taoist Biker Says:

    Ok, that is awesome! Huzzah!! 😀

  2. glassowater Says:

    on a side note, I collect gargoyles….where can I get that one???

  3. kaylee2 Says:

    Awesome 🙂 but that is not how you feel is it? I am still sore 😦

  4. Peter Parkour Says:

    Brutal. 😛 Dare I ask what your inspiration was? 😉

  5. betme Says:

    Taoist ~ Thank you much. Hell hath no fury… 😉

    Glassowater ~ gargoyles are so cool. I wish I owned that one. I found the pic when I was googling “Mooning”

    Kaylee ~ I have felt that way in the past, but all is good in my hood right now. It will take some time for your body to heal… I wish I could speed up the process. Sending you hugs.

    Spidey ~ You can ask, but… 😀 I started putting that one together in my head a few years back when Mr. J and I hit a bumpy patch. yesterday, I was a tad bit miffed with him and knocked out the complete poem.

    We are crazy like that… The good part is we both know that the crazies pass and we love each other enough to work thru ANYTHING. This writing helps me get it out of my head so that I can focus on revenge… hahaha… just kidding. We are good.

    “I love me some him”

  6. trishatruly Says:

    Wow! Great poem!! LOVED the ending!

    Glad it doesn’t reflect your current feelings towards your man! 🙂

  7. Wendy Says:

    Awesome. This should be in a Valentine’s Day card.

  8. betme Says:

    Trisha ~ I have been reading a lot of Dorothy Parker lately and her twisted humor is rubbing off on me. (not that I need any encouragement)

    Thanks Wendy, but for some strange reason Hallmark locks their doors when I knock. 😀

  9. thegirlfromtheghetto Says:

    Loved it, such a great picture, too….

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